In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?
Our world is the ensemble of national peace and harmony. Even after witnessing the giant wars in the past, every citizen rightfully seeks a crime-free place to live in. But, due to certain factors, some people still urge towards committing criminal activities. In the following paragraphs, I shall delve into the causes of crime with illustrations.
Firstly, many people engage in offensive work due to their personal actions. Research shows that the younger generation is more prone to being able to do wrongdoing over others. Most people committ crime as a result of family issues like Parents separation, negligence towards children and so on which hampers the mind of a pupil. Hence, it is better to properly educate the child about criminal doings at a young age so as to avoid any mishaps.
Secondly, the grown-ups face many hurdles during the initial period of their new lives especially regarding jobs. there is no denying that a human being has to face a lots of disapprovals before finally getting a desired work. But,it is often seen that these adolescents wreak havoc when they cannot face any challenge that life throws at them. Therefore, they choose a more easy path of going in the wrong direction which includes nefarious and lawbreaking deeds. Rod is the logic of fools. Unless one is taught to catch the right train, they are willing to run on the opposite side.
Beyond any shred of doubt, it would be foolish to oversight the corrupt and questionable society that one lives in. it becomes the duty of every citizen to protect themselves and their land and break it free from such unacceptable behaviour of trespassers.
To finish up, there is a critical requirement for the legislatures to concentrate on tending to lack of education and joblessness issues, which ascribe to the ascent of wrongdoing rates. In the meantime it requests for reinforcing the legal framework so individuals dread the repercussions of carrying out any offense.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, as to, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0122324159 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75164110513 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648318042813 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4883233058 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0555555556 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0871458840726 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0248416582219 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498433343667 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0428502129562 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509008360134 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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