Are people spending too much time at work? Discuss your views on this topic. People spending too much time at their workplaces has become a major issue to tackle. Either due to the work pressure or due to attitude issues and extreme behavior patterns like workaholism, some people tend to spend a relatively high amount of time in their workplaces.
In recent times, the phenomenon of spending too much time at work and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate around the world. Although contested by many that working for a longer time in office could be a major concern to tackle, such issue is regarded as both constructive and consequently positive by a substantial number of individuals. However, I am inclined to believe that working for long hours is not good for individuals, but I will explain my point by discussing both sides of the discussion.
At the outset and from a general standpoint, some people believe that extreme behavior like workaholism could be beneficial as it could lead to a successful career and being richer. To illustrate, according to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered that hard working people had a more successful career. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both rich and successful apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of working pattern, staying for a long time in office and working day and night could have its disadvantages. Employees have to encounter myriad issues such as deteriorated health, less time for personal life and mental pressure. For example, research conducted by a prestigious university asserted that workaholic people are more dissatisfied with life. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of this remarkable phenomenon.
To recapitulate, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides., I profoundly believe that a balanced approach towards personal and professional lifestyle should be taken.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, consequently, hence, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38039215686 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15026713257 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635294117647 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8407509988 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.727272727 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23915330454 0.242375264174 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079769553154 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704696986233 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117404097054 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832477804405 0.0609392437508 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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