In many countries children leaves their parents home after finishing their schooling. Some people think this approach good and some people think this as a negative trend. Do you agree or disagree with the statement.
Certainly, it is true that students, around the globe, tries to leave their parents home and begins to stay away from their parents. Some people think this trend is good, whereas, others have contrasting opinion. I completely disagree with this.
To begin with, some parents wants their children to be independent. In this context, they let their children left their house and stay all alone. This is where the parents commits the mistake. Firstly, once children leaves the house, they started to feel absolute freedom as they don't have to seek permission from anyone. In addition to this, they begins to consume many precarious things. For example, according to a survey, the school students were found consuming drugs, smoking, drinking, in contrast of adults. The proportion was high for the former and low for the latter. Moreover, many students were found indulged in most of the criminal activities. There is high chances of school students where these young people may commit crime and becomes a hard-core criminal. These issues can destroy the bright future of students.
In addition to this, the school age is also known as tinder age where children decides their career after finishing their schooling. This age is the age where children are not that much mature, and cannot differentiate between what is right or good and what is bad or wrong. They may choose the wrong path when they do not have anyone to tell. Apart from this, they can become the victim of human-trafficking. Child-trafficking is under the central focus of police departments all over the world. This is a thought provoking issue because child-traffickers central target is the students who live all alone and miles away from their family. Moreover, kidnapping is another major concern of many departments. They also targets the children whose parents are from affluent section of society.
To wrap up, it can be said that parents are required to reconsider their decision about letting their children be stay all alone or having them resides with them. I strongly oppose this trend.
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Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion: begin
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Suggestion:
...comes a hard-core criminal. These issues can destroy the bright future of student...
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Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'target'
Suggestion: target
... concern of many departments. They also targets the children whose parents are from aff...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, whereas, apart from, for example, in addition, in contrast, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04597701149 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60966373841 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557471264368 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4658714173 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1666666667 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344549537452 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093740811378 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879456563809 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18934755695 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13083520287 0.056905535591 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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