Some people argue that fashion items cost too much money. Others say that this is acceptable because fashion is an important part of life. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
fashion has become debatable issue recently. many people hold the opinion that fashion items is the big expense. others, however, point out that fashion plays an important role in their life, so it is worth to spend.
On the one hand, it comes as no surprise that many people go to the expense of fashion since the fashion trend change dramatically, hence fashion items are easily go out of fashion and, which results in people spend too much money on new fashion items in order to be on trend. some people who is a slave to fashion always want keep up with the latest fashion. Therefore, they wish to possess latest items, though the price is extremely high.
On the other hand, investing in fashion is worth for some reasons. Firstly, the fashion style of someone may reflect their personalities. A case in point is some employers claim clothes can be the deciding factor between two similar candidates. The second reason is that you get what you pay for. In fact, it can not deny that the expensive items tend to have the high standard, comparing to cheaper ones. For example, the items of designer labels which have the high price have a longer retention period as they are made from good materials. In addition, it is so hard for designers to create a collection, so their products deserved to be paid adequately.
people have different views about whether fashion items cost too much money or not. In my point of view, fashion items do not cost too much money if they are not interested in fashion since they just need purchase must-have items which are smart clothes and timeless with reasonable price. however, it would be better if you can afford branded products
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73469387755 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36466733953 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554421768707 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5586978488 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340099188519 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111051306197 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104991139724 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226977367613 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810654162124 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.