More and more people are opting for ready made food instead of freshly cooked food. Do this development has more advantage over disadvantage.
There has been immense change in the food habits among our society. A few people feel that packed foods are more beneficial over freshly cooked foods. In my opinion there are more disadvantage in consuming ready-made foods over fresh food.
On one hand, ready-made food market is expanding at an alarming rate, along with the rate of unhealthy individuals too. Copious of these packed foods contains preservatives for food to stay non perishable for many days. Moreover, these preservatives are some form of hazardous chemicals the people consume of regular basis. For instance, a NGO recently tested a few sample of packed foods to check the ingredients and the results were shocking. It was found that most of these products contained sodium nitrate which is a major cancer causing element. Since, the foods have to maintain their freshness and flavors these are added to foods. Indeed, today the major reason for witnessing a rise in cancer patients are because of their unhealthy food habits.
On the other hand, we can ensure that we do not consume any harmful chemicals when we cook ourselves. It is found that people who consume fresh cooked vegetables and fruits lead a healthy and peaceful life. For example, in a recent survey by a leading fitness magazine it was found that 30% of people who cooked their own meals which contained fresh vegetable and meat maintained a healthy heart and other parameter of health, issues such as sugar, blood pressure were normal. Furthermore, a person can count the intake of calories that are required on daily basis and can cook accordingly, whereas a packed food will contain more calories.
To conclude, time is saved by consuming packed foods, but over the loss of one's health. Health is wealth, and nothing is imperative than this.Therefore, freshly cooked food have more advantage over consuming packed foods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06148867314 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58757242373 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572815533981 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3268942654 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.75 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389287397946 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135605991836 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125461239974 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262977479223 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120301598722 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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