Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion
Few individuals believe that solution to environmental issues could be <span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="are "></span>found by doing global efforts but few people support the idea of using national involvement. In my opinion, I consider that dealing it nationally would be far effective as the small response from each person would impact enormously towards fixing problems related to environment.
On the one hand, few people favor the idea of fixing issues about environment by making national efforts and I agree. As the core problem on which these issues arise are born mostly by the negligence and lack of awareness of each citizen. By the helping programs from the state, people could fix all the major threats to the environment. For instance, they can do that by properly recycle waste which would not pollute the air, moreover, it could also be done by planting more trees and avoid using products which are not environment friendly.
On the other hand, people who support the global scale involvement on dealing with environment issues might think that some problems which are out of reach of an individual country needs a global address. For example, the global warming has increased by the alarming rate, which has impacted glaciers in Antarctica to melt and increasing the temperature to all time high. This issue cannot be resolved by any one country as resources should be pooled from different countries to tackle with this issue.
To conclude, while people may vary in their opinion, I think that individual effort by each country stands a better chance to resolve environmental issues which will impact globally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'need'?
Suggestion: need
...e out of reach of an individual country needs a global address. For example, the glob...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30303030303 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37464074883 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579545454545 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.1851826441 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228908281376 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862070327619 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068626809662 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139295417564 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518144551014 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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