Scientist say that in the future humanity will speak the same language . Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
There is no denial that beside the major community speaking English as mother tongue, there are also a plenty of other languages all over the world. In the future, some scientists anticipate and hypothesize that what if there is an international language for over 200 countries. However, apart from several apparent advantages, it is my firm conviction that the drawbacks are overwhelmed.
On the one hand, the emergence of universal language will bring about numerous benefits for humanity in terms of removing language barrier. One of the most primary effect is that commercial and travel services can be carried out smoothly regardless western or eastern hemisphere. With the rise of global language, the gap between countries and continents could be gotten rid of which produce the result that people can travel to any nation without studying their foreign language. What is more, the potential and opportunity of occupation will be broaden to students and workers. In results, it can be an ideal measurement for unemployment in developing nations as well as the shortage of workforce in countries suffering from aging population such as Japan.
Apart from positive effects I expressed above, the demerits of speaking the same languages can not be denied. Needless to say, in these days, each country has such a strong sense of identity since each enhance their own customs and belief. When the universal language comes about, every nation has to sacrifice a small part or even loss their unique culture in order to integrate with the entire world.In the circumstance when every countries merges into a wide society, the diversity in culture and customs will no longer exist and substituted by a similar culture. In some cases, the younger generation by no means can understand and know clearly their origin when knowledge about history is no loner imparted from senior generation. Although people stop hesitating when traveling between two countries, it seems to be not as fascinating as before when everything is going to be familiar.
In conclusion, making every countries on the globe speaking the same language can be considered to be inconceivable or if it is possible it will consume a long time. However, even this situation brings the world into a solitary community, in some cases, it will be counterproductive and has negative effects on culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, apart from, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in some cases, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1983.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1640625 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84729513266 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5703125 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5114167481 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.2 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163008922837 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560493784338 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556224546384 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102298684581 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036018913922 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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