Technological inventions come out on a daily basis. Take one example and discuss its advantage and disadvantage to individual and society.
The importance of technological inventions, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of more and more investiments are been done in this area is increasing each year and has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on beneficts that it can bring to the technological current world in recent years. it can be agreed that advantages can be taken to a individual area or society. this essay will elaborate how this advantages could be used and how a disadvantage can be showed when is not well structured and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why new technological inventions are a great toward to the future, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that for specifics groups it turns a disadvantage. As an illustration, a University of Adelaide study has shown that 68% of all inventions are been to find a cure for uncurable illnesses. Therefore, others inventions are directly related to reducing human work with machines.
Another key justification for upholding this notion is that relate to illness. For instance, a close friend was benefited after a new drug has been created to cure his Parkinson shakes. Hence, his life became much better after this.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the importance of new technological inventions, although should the government control this kind of program with care and should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13414634146 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06423454496 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605691056911 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6867850901 50.4703680194 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.818181818 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11715328829 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04112960911 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354442223844 0.071462118173 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0605368804458 0.151781067708 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391615359901 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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