As the world becomes technologically advanced, computer are replacing more and more job. What are some job positions that may be lost because of computers What are some problems that may result from this situation.
Nowadays, computer systems have been grown very quickly so that a lot of things in a short time could be done. Nobody before did not know that in the future computer would eliminate jobs of people. A number of jobs have been lost as a direct result of new computer technology because year after year people get unemployed.This essay will discuss how computers could replace citizens’ work and will describe its consequences.
Due to the fact that the internet is developing rapidly, online-shopping replaces a lot of work in different spheres. Therefore, more than half of the shop-assistants begin to lose their job position. For example, in USA there is a big shopping store named Amazon. Instead of workers, store uses only online-payment and sensory protection against theft work. As a result, the number of positions lost to computers grows exponentially, and unemployment continues to get worse.
Employees are starting to lose their work positions, therefore there are a lot of bad results. For instance, community is becoming more and more lazy, and also is becoming to be dependent on technology. In addition, this could lead to the decline of education’s level, and after that citizens would lose their experience in different areas, which is the biggest problem of the humanity.
In my opinion, in the next years new work trends would be dependent.
As computers replace jobs, new positions would have to be invented. More and more people would go into new business for themselves, and hopefully put the personal touch back into their work. In my opinion, the human workforce will demonstrate that it is more valuable than computer techniques.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 323, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17279411765 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01461396919 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566176470588 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7819851334 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251816603252 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813150634703 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062546523625 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126123678695 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587384564612 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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