You use trains to reach office but the timetable of the train has been changed recently. Write a letter to railway authorities for the revised timetable, and the train you take to work no longer stops at your station.
In your letter:
introduce yourself
what are the problems caused due to the changes
what you suggest them to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Rakesh Kumar Soni, resident of Charni Road. I regularly use your train service to and from the office. The recent changes in the train schedule is causing lot of sufferings for commuters like me and I hope if you could consider the revision in the time-table.
Let me explain the situation in detail. I work for a construction company and several other officers follows the same schedule of mine to reach to their workplace. I used to take one of your train service at 7:50am from Charni Road and reach the destination by 8:30 am in the morning. The train drops me at Andheri station which is quite near to my office at a walkable distance.
However, due to recent changes in the schedule the train do not stops at Andheri Station, instead it stops at Bhayender station which is almost 20Km away from our office. As a result we need to travel few extra miles to reach our workplace. Moreover, the rush coming from Bhayender to Andheri is at the peak level due to this the buses and trains are overcrowded. Unfortunately, many commuters like me are not able to reach office on time which is affecting our productivity and our performance. Consequently, everyone is upset with your service.
I would request you to revise the timetable and reinstate 7:50 am train service from Charni to stop at Andheri station, which will enable all the commuters like me to reach their workplace on time.
Yours faithfully,
Rakesh Soni
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: AM_IN_THE_MORNING[1]
Message: Use simply 'am'.
Suggestion: am
... Road and reach the destination by 8:30 am in the morning. The train drops me at Andheri station ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'stop'?
Suggestion: stop
...hanges in the schedule the train do not stops at Andheri Station, instead it stops at...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 172, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ch is almost 20Km away from our office. As a result we need to travel few extra mi...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, moreover, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 255.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73725490196 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63649015809 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541176470588 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6710094892 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2857142857 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317879048888 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108796994522 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751389098571 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210929396285 0.12726935374 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287090922891 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.