In many developing countries, there is a problem with a declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this?
air and water pollution are becoming major concerns for the entire world. Especially in developing countries, the continuously growing industrialization and infrastructure attributes heavily towards pollution. So, are there methods available to control this problem? this essay will discuss such ideas that could help alleviate this situation and improve the quality of life for people belonging to developing nations.
industrialization helps a country grow at a rapid pace but this should not be at the expense of the environment. like many developed countries, more stringent rules and regulations around operational practices needs to be introduced by government of developing countries. For example, a few years ago France created a mandate to replace blast furnace method with less polluting electrical arc furnace for graphite production. this change reduced pollution in their country by approximately 30 percent. similarly, Singapore created a method to treat industrial waste and make it eco-friendly, thus deeming it safe to dump into the ocean. Indeed, such practices can create a massive difference in lives of people as well as plants and animals sharing the same ecosystem.
infrastructure also plays a major role in the development of any nation but construction is also one of the major causes of pollution. developing countries can benefit heavily by following practices introduced by a few countries which reduce this unwarranted side-effect. For example, in the early 2000, Canada introduced a method of dust proof construction, where they add a custom solution to the material being used which reduces the creation of dust by up to 70 percent. similarly, Germany developed block method for creating bridges. In this method, instead of constructing everything near or inside the water body, all the components are created in a confined and less polluting place and later joined together in water like Lego blocks. this method has been effective in nullifying water pollution caused while constructing bridges. developing countries can take inspiration or even directly copy such methods to reduce the adversity of pollution in their respective countries.
In conclusion, this essay discussed solutions to the problem of air and water pollution caused by industries and ever-increasing construction. while introducing highly strict rules and regulation can help in improving the pollution situation created by industries; using more advanced and efficient methods can help deal with the problems caused by construction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2176.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66666666667 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17371747937 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559895833333 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 675.0 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9799586027 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.526315789 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2105263158 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235250927503 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776351348017 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542973235153 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164170623028 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416137547648 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.