Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
Nowadays, the question Whether regions affect people to achieve their successes? has become long-running dispute among the people all around the world. It is a widely held view that regions play a significant role in individuals' life, whereas i tend to believe that one must weigh up the pros and cons.
From a social point of view, local regions are indeed bound to persons' life, which it might lead to both people's behaviors and success. For instance, a group of profound socialists, working at a prestigious university, conducted a longitudinal study of relationship between local regions and people achievements as well as people believes. This evidence presents thus far supports the contention that local countries are positively correlated with not only people success but also their actions about opportunities.
Moreover, in social terms, people success are undoubtedly attributable to their local country's future, in that it would lead to better, richer and more technological country. A well-known of such attribution is unsuitable education system, which cause for consider since it had been mistaken in taking countries' future for granted.
Had individuals thought in advance, Have had a opportunities to make more successful persons in future. Thus, successful persons could play a significant role in their countries future.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that local regions can affect successful person and this is mutual relationship. However, as many garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce some strict legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'Whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: Whether
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Has
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ndividuals thought in advance, Have had a opportunities to make more successful p...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a opportunity' or simply 'opportunities'?
Suggestion: a opportunity; opportunities
...ndividuals thought in advance, Have had a opportunities to make more successful persons in futu...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...unities to make more successful persons in future. Thus, successful persons could play a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.536 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0334772127 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3113459961 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237545561347 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977387599654 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786253953316 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130596868806 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657499858953 0.0609392437508 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.