Any new technological development in the recent years is a boon or curse for the society in general
Technological advancements have deeply impacted societies in the last few years. While some people believe technology has negatives effects on human-beings, others believe it has contributed significantly to humans development. This essay will discuss why new technologies have positive impacts on people but sometimes present adversely affect individuals' life.
New advancements have expanded rapidly many problems in todays' societies which live dependent on it. Mental illnesses have dramatically increased around the world due to social media advent and keep achieving tremendous numbers. For example, Facebook clearly defines the degradation of people through fake profiles which lead people to hurt themselves believing they are not perfect. Societies have been profoundly affected by the development of technologies.
On the other hand, human race development has been rapidly expanded by the creation of new advancements which helps people to live more. For instance, its active involvement in medical advancements which prolong life expectancy in many countries around the world. Advanced technology has been invented for the evolution of human beings on earth.
This essay discussed how mental health has been achieving higher outcomes through new advancements and the negative effect on communities. In view of the outline of the arguments above, technological advancements have positive outweigh on the life of people which keep their evolution dependent on technology.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-27 | manraj123 | 77 | view |
| 2020-01-24 | yasamin.gharib62 | 88 | view |
| 2019-07-20 | edsonsimoes | 61 | view |
| 2019-07-20 | edsonsimoes | 55 | view |
| 2019-07-17 | edsonsimoes | 55 | view |
- Do you think formal written assessments in today's world to assess students’ performance is effective or not? Discuss your viewpoint on this and support your answer with examples. 61
- Technological innovations have affected our lives. Do you agree or disagree? 72
- Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do u support it or not? (Agree/Disagree) 72
- Company Top level Authorities should or should not take employees suggestions or ideas to take any decisions. Discuss. 77
- Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples. 55
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Technological
technological advancements have deeply impacted socie...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: New
...es adversely affect individuals lives. new advancements have expanded rapidly many...
^^^
Line 2, column 54, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...nts have expanded rapidly many problems in nowadays societies. mental illnesses have dramat...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 76, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Mental
...ly many problems in nowadays societies. mental illnesses have dramatically increased a...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 253, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Societies
...dation of people through fake profiles. societies have been profoundly affected by the de...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Advanced
...ncements which prolong life expectancy. advanced technology has been invented for the ev...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 20.9802955665 19% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 1207.87684729 84% => OK
No of words: 166.0 242.827586207 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.11445783133 5.00649968141 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.92707691288 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16987127528 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 139.433497537 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638554216867 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.57093596059 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.0731200559 50.4703680194 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.5833333333 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8333333333 20.9669160288 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17526287945 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701126637441 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389585149231 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108976959968 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305168563405 0.0609392437508 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.44 53.1260098522 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.57 11.5310837438 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.32886699507 126% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.