The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Undoubtedly, there is plethora of criteria that should be considered while choosing a career. While I accept the idea that high salary should not be underestimated, I agree that other factors are of same importance as money for some reasons which will be discussed in this essay.
On the one hand, high income is of utmost importance for fulfilling one’s basic needs in both present and future time. To illustrate, with a high salary, people can afford the life they dream of, for example, a descent house of their own, a car, a private healthcare and much more. This extravagant lifestyle is unattainable with low salary jobs. In addition, earning more money throughout early work life means more secured future. For instance, my uncle used to work as a physician in highly reputable organizations in the Gulf during his career life, and with his savings, he was able to pursue his dream to travel around the world after his retirement.
From another angle, I am convinced that not only is high salary significant in opting for a career but there are also two other measures of paramount importance. Firstly, the work atmosphere which ought to be encouraging in order for employees can have the opportunity to be more creative. To exemplify, some corporations, Nestle for example, tend to announce the employee of the month based on specific criteria which creates an ethical competition between employees, and this would definitely lead to the progression of the staff and the enterprises as well. Moreover, the working hours is an indispensable factor while accepting any job offer, as some demanding jobs have unsociable working hours, weekend and night shifts for example, which may contribute to elevating the risk of some illnesses such as high blood pressure.
To conclude, although it is true that earning high salary should not be neglected, I agree that other measures have to be taken in consideration while applying for a certain job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04320987654 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83925790648 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586419753086 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.6999484801 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.166666667 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143815411644 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535250705874 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445077022147 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100120415822 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323111280196 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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