Some people believe that sports are a key element in our society, while others argue that it is just a recreational activity to be done in one’s free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The issue of considering sports as a basic needs in human’s daily life has been discussed by many, and although some say these activities are for fun, others, including myself, believe that people should be aware of the importance in doing exercise.
Due to evolution in computer and technological advances, people’s lifestyle has changes in many aspects of day-to-day lives, which renders lots of difficulties for their body, not only physically also mentally. For example, sitting posture and lack of movements or unhealthy diet that they all threaten a happy and healthy living. To overcome all the expenses that sedentary lifestyle and consuming junk foods would expose to our society, sports and doing scheduled exercises seem to be a must-have item in every one’s life. Furthermore, the number of individuals who are dealing with depression and its consequences like loneliness or lack of incentives is escalating. For this problem, sports environment could boost their circle of friends and because of chemical changes in blood, the possibility of depression symptoms would decrease and even hope and joyfulness could be replaced.
Some people argue that sports are leisure activity and if there is any free time or interest, people could entertain themselves with them. However, not devoting a specific time for doing physical activity would result in having a lethargic family which in large scale is a burden on our society since they need cure, attention and support.
In conclusion, I believe that individuals ought to allocate time and sometimes money to follow a routine in sports if they want to lead a healthy lifestyle with achieving personal satisfaction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., which renders lots of difficulties for their body, not only physically also men...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34456928839 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89489608574 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632958801498 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.3228780086 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.555555556 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217146207096 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837447057796 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756746507919 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131611530786 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496601386827 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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