Do you agree or disagree? The way people dress is a
good indication of his or her personality or character.
These days, the way people look is very important, at least for themselves. The question which arises here is whether the way they dress reveals their personality or not. I, personally, contend that what the deciding about someone character and personality with just their dress and their look, is not proper. I fill this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
The first reason to bear in mind is that these days some people are pretending to have a good personality just by their beautiful dress. As we are getting more socialize with society, we meet more these people. Somehow is challenging to distinguish these faking group from the other one who seems like who we think by look into their clothing. For instance, when I was looking for a good roommate in the dormitory, I saw a girl with running shoe and sports dress. I thought that it seems she workout, so she is the perfect roommate for me. Because she can run together in the morning, she can be my partner in plays and so on. I choose her, and after officially being roommates, I understand that she is not a sports fan at all. She dresses that way because she thought that she looks beautiful in them. Had I not choose that girl just by the way she looks, I could have picked a nice one to be my roommate.
The second reason is that these days some people have not enough time for buying the best dress so they cannot look like just as one with a beautiful personality. People are very busy these days and have a variety of crucial concerns. So, they have not enough time to dedicate some of that for shopping. Steve Jobs, who is a successful businessman, has a great personality. He is smart, full of energy and inspiration, but he always wears a grey t-shirt like an ordinary person. Because he has no time for buying something else. So that is why I think that judging the personality of a person by their dress is not a plausible way.
In conclusion, I disagree with thinking about someone personality by their dress. In these days, the more people are pretending to have a good personality, the more their dress is lovely. But all of that is because they are faking. Also, some people who have a great character are so busy to buy a fabulous dress.so by looking at them, are we assuming that they have not a good personality? Not at all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 234, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'distinguishing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: distinguishing
...re these people. Somehow is challenging to distinguish these faking group from the other one w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, so, at least, for instance, i think, in conclusion, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48598130841 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52951828375 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443925233645 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6756398643 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.12 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161333994637 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533222132255 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550582739404 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121008848689 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308147284664 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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