Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to
entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate.
Discuss both views and give you own opinion
It is true that museum is a great place for both entertaining and educational purposes. From my perspective, I am an advocate of the opinion that people should visit museum to enrich their knowledge.
On the one hand, it is arguably said that museum is one of the ubiquitous places for stress relief and revitalization. This is a unique site that has numerous attractive backgrounds and historical items, and therefore the public has a tendency to save memories by taking photos with their friends and families. This means that they are able to enhance the relationships with peers or tighten family bonds, which makes a huge contribution to help them feel comfortable and enjoyable after depleted working hours or stressful classes. Furthermore, people also have chances to enjoy masterpieces composed by renowned artists with ease comparing to the pressures they have to deal with at the workplaces or schools.
On the other hand, some contend that people are able to take their understanding even further when visit museums. Firstly, the city dwellers visiting museums on a regular basis are conveyed about a number of historical events. As a result, being exposed to periods that various soldiers combat against enemies to gain freedom will heighten people’s patriotism. Secondly, museum visitors are informed about how difficult living conditions their predecessors had to cope with. If they know that people living in the war time hardly had sufficient advantageous opportunity to live and study, they will respect the improved quality life that they have these days.
In conclusion, I believe that museum is a decent educative method for inhabitants, especially adolescents rather than a pleasure place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32600732601 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91541036537 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655677655678 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6970296958 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.166666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196058068557 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722979158073 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498835846093 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129805687555 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056966160396 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.