Some people think visitors to others countries should imitate local customs and behaviours. Some people disagree; they think the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss the two views and give your opinion.
Today, trend of visiting different places in different countries is growing. There have been divided opinions on the topic that whether tourists should do and behave like the people of host country or should the host country accept visitors as they are. Some readily comply with this view; while, a few others argue against. Therefore, ahead of my position both view should be analysed.
Explaining the former views, the primary argument the supporters would put forward is that it decrease chances of misunderstanding and embarrassment. For instance, in the UK it is offensive to ask about any information of path or any area , whereas it is common for Indian . Additionally, it incline knowledge of tourist toward the culture and behaviour of the host country’s citizens. They can broaden their horizon after observing different rituals and method. Moreover, visitors establish a genuine connection with the local people because feel respect when their customers are understandable and imitated. At that time local people act with honesty.
On the other hand, there are many reasons why a host country should tolerate and embrace foreign culture. To begin with, no country should except new culture and traditions because of their visitors. Moreover, host country should not force to adopt their culture to tourists. For example, if the visitors are pure vegetarian, there should not be compulsion to take diet of non-vegetarian just because of the host country’s people eat that. Furthermore, if there is any rules like only known cultural person can visit the state, it makes effect on country’s revenue because of low visit rate of tourists.
To conclude with my opinion, I feel that someone who moving to another country should respect the culture, traditions of that country. However, there is no reasons for discarding visitors from the country. At the end, I tend to believe that mutual understanding between both the visitors and the host country is necessary to maintain.
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Suggestion: adopting
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i feel, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28526645768 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8581022309 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573667711599 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1126884885 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7222222222 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351625752643 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105459008547 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750577568917 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215294685174 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790490702636 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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