Many university students live with their families while others live away from home because their universities are in different places
These days, a lot of university students live with families while others live away from home because their universities are in a different places is believed bring up some opinions. Those such as whether live away from home gives more advantages or even disadvantages for the college student. In this essay, I completely agree that it gives more benefits rather than disadvantages for several cases.
In the one hand, the main benefit of that problem is the college students who get their selves away from home will train them to be independent and get used to be a good life manager. Besides, living far from home will make them escape from dependency on parens. It is because they have to do their chores on their own that usually their parents do. Indirectly they need to adapt and learn how to manage between colleges and house chores time. Literally, every student has learning hours and leisure time therefore they have to utilize their leisure time to do the house chores because no one can do it for them. As the result, living alone will train them to be independent and a good time manager. So it is important to try living away from home to increase self independence and management skill.
Differs with the benefits above, living away from home will cost a lot of money. They have to plotted expenditure for rent a house, flight tickets, and other needs. Furthermore, sometimes we got no time to make a food among out limited time. Therefore, we have to buy cooked food in restaurant which is more expensive compared to cooking food by our own. As the result if the students can’t manage their time and money properly, living away from home is such a wasteful. So there is no doubt to get away from home because to prevent the disadvantages is depending on the students independence and management skill.
In conclusion, from right here I stand that believed if living away from home is such a bad idea because it will increase students management skill and independence. In my opinion, it gives more benefits to the student rather than the drawback.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'place'?
Suggestion: place
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
...rmore, sometimes we got no time to make a food among out limited time. Therefore, we h...
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Line 5, column 465, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...properly, living away from home is such a wasteful. So there is no doubt to get away from ...
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Line 5, column 557, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...me because to prevent the disadvantages is depending on the students independence and manage...
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Line 5, column 577, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...t the disadvantages is depending on the students independence and management skill. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76944444444 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58732517153 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483333333333 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.601162027 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3888888889 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.451274178863 0.244688304435 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149772497877 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162009483609 0.0667982634062 243% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300510764857 0.151304729494 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12054392039 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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