The issue which frequently generates a great deal of heated debate is as people become increasingly more dependent on motorcars, the public transport systems tend to run down and the problem is certainly discussed in contemporary world. Many academics contend that people dependent on motorcars and tent to run down. This essay will express the complete agreement with this notion and will justify my viewpoint.
To commence with, there are wide range arguments to support the aforementioned statement however, the most conspicuous one lies in, fact is not remote or complicated. But accessible and practical. It has long been considered perfectly justified by proponents to assume that motorcars save our time. Furthermore, it is asserted that it is very easy to comute(travel) to one place to other place. A classic example of this occurring is statistics revealed by UN clearly demonstrates that approximately sixty of the nations worldwide prefer to follow this trend.
Another convincing fact to ascertain this is . Besides, it seems incontrovertible that. A relevant example is nations world over have observed a dramatic shift in the opinion of public regarding this issue.
In the view of argument discussed abovel, it is my considered opinion that advantages overweight the disadvantages.
The issue which frequently generates a great deal of heated debate is as people become increasingly more dependent on motor cars, the public transport systems tend to run down and the problem is certainly discussed in contemporary world. Many academics contend that people dependent on motor cars and tent to run down. this essay will express the complete agreement with this notion and will justify my viewpoint.
To commence with, there are wide range arguments to support the aforementioned statement however, the most conspicuous one lies in, fact is not remote or complicated. But accessible and practical. it has long been considered perfectly justified by proponents to assume that motor cars save our time. Furthermore, it is asserted that it is very easy to comute(travel) to one place to other place. A classic example of this occurring is statistics revealed by UN clearly demonstrates that approximately sixty of the nations worldwide prefer to follow this trend.
Another convincing fact to ascertain this is . Besides, it seems incontrovertible that. A relevant example is nations world over have observed a dramatic shift in the opinion of public regarding this issue.
In the view of argument discussed above, it is my considered opinion that advantages overweight the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...roponents to assume that motor cars save our time. Furthermore, it is asserted th...
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...her convincing fact to ascertain this is . Besides, it seems incontrovertible that...
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...vantages overweight the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, if, regarding
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 205.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37073170732 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07992398543 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668292682927 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.1576766498 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.75 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3097945242 0.242375264174 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931557915494 0.0925447433944 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.223253633537 0.071462118173 312% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16436872451 0.151781067708 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.244117174416 0.0609392437508 401% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.