To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Now a days with the ever evolving technology, the cities have become the centers of any new developement in the society and here the argument is that studying the major cities one can aunderstand the important characteristics of that society at that time. With the focus of developement of a nation way more centralization is a very common phenomenon as most of the facilities and new advancement in techlogies are deluged in the cities. As a result people from outside of the cities get attracted move to the cities as they provide more and better opportunities for earnings. Also we can find the latest trends and issues to be more expressed and demonstrated in the cities. If we look at the recent past, the arab spring that swept the middle east wast first initiated in the cities. Although, that might the case, this can also lead to some biases in observation as the view of the socity might become parochial. this points will elaborated in flow of the following passages.
In the ancient times, in the era of roman emperor, the city of rome was the representative of that time. Much of developement of knowledge of various brances of science, the application democracy all could have found in the city of Rome. We can get a very wholesome picture of how the society ran and functioned in that time. The ways of life of the city dwellers were more influential than the people lived in the rural ares. If we even shift our focus to the current modern era, metropolitans like new york, chicago, Abu Dhabi, paris all gives a very loud and clear picture of the culture and the way of living there. That deep dish pizza delicacy to the capped robe in abu dhabi all plays a significant role in values and tradition in the society.
However, the folk culture which is more dominant in the rural ares of the are also of very important role player in shaping a society. Mostly in the aisna countries, like Bangladesh, India, china, the rural and sub-urban areas still plays a very significant social, economical role in the society. The upbringing of the future generation is greatly impacted by that and we can observe the effect in the later life. Although with time this cultures are becoming more more archaic. At the same , if we only focus on the cities to understand a society we might get a very opartial picture as most of the major cities are well nurshied with boutines from the government. although that might be the case, still the one cant just discount that this cities are the main center in building the nation, thus influencing the characteristics of the society.
From the presented arguement above , we can agree thtat observing the major cities give a understanding of the characteristics of the scociety, but it is not without it flaws. In thhe current world where most of daily chores are city-centric it makes more sense to focus on it and its culture to undestnd how the society functioning altogether. But we can not also completely ignore the rural ares and the folk culture. Combining them together gives us the comprehensive picture of a society.
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...the comprehensive picture of a society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, still, thus, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2543.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 537.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7355679702 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81386128306 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75199377397 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469273743017 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 831.6 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8265612625 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.565217391 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.347826087 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08695652174 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102234698476 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0295795645837 0.0831039109588 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316486343728 0.0758088955206 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692653721568 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372805398752 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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