Some people believe the visitors in other countries should follow the customs and behaviors. other think that host country should welcome cultural differences. discuss both the views and give your own opinion
The tourism is basic attraction that people visit other places. Some people think that tourist should obey and respect the cultures and traditions of foreign countries while, other consider that host country ought to acknowledge the multicultural point of view. The responsible tourism is very important for sustainability of that specific region. In this essay we will discuss both the the uncomfortably of local peoples and rules for perseverance of that specific spot and on the other hand most of the visitors find difficult to follow others behaviors.
Although most of people wants to discover other interesting spots for vacation and holidays but each places have its own diverse culture and traditions. Many argue that tourists have very little knowledge about region and each having its specific behaviors. Apart from that they are away from their home land. if visitor bound to follow these i would be uncomfortable and stressing for them. However, they are present for relaxation and discovering new thing. this will eventually leads to lower tourism. for instant if you say western tourist to wear heavy traditional dress, its might be rude and have bad effect on them.
But, on the side many opine that along with interesting tourist spot most of tourists visit place also to feel its culture and traditions because place can be seen on internet. But when multicultural things observe on such places then main attraction towards visit fade. apart from that local population could not feel comfortable with a lots of foreigner around them especially places where tourism is really high.On some places for the preservation of resort some restriction applied its better to follow them to sustainability and conservancy. If multi culture and behaviors mixed up them nothing would be new. For example in Pakistan a tribe Kalash have its specific tradition which peoples from all over the come to see them.
In this essay i discussed both the views from visitor and host country but in conclusion i agree with first point for responsible tourism and sustainability of resort its important that tourists should follows and respect local customs and traditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, so, then, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18803418803 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70507381998 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532763532764 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.6276801339 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.117647059 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6470588235 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233233209757 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738626328162 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102997959346 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18388814776 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13557860035 0.056905535591 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.