Everyone should stay at school until 18.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is inevitable that entering school enables students to take their understanding even further and it is one of the most ubiquitous choices for the public. While being a student help a person reap educational benefits, I totally disagree with the idea that everyone are forced to study at school until 18.
On the one hand, studying at educational institutions has several advantages that the majority chooses this option. Most citizens have the intention of applying for a well-remunerated job later in life as a way to satisfy their personal needs and take care of their families. In order to pursue tertiary education which is likely to allow the public to gain a well-paid job, people are required to finish the curriculum provided by high schools, and pass the entrance exam to university. If they are unable to accumulate sufficient knowledge, it is extremely challenging to gain accessibility to higher education, and therefore alleviating the possibility of achieving a decent job.
On the other hand, forcing everyone to study until 18 is not a feasible method. There are certain young people who are incapable of continuing learning and memorizing information taught at schools. Thus, they struggle to gain good grades, and vocational training is a more advantageous choice. Furthermore, with students being interested in fields not associated with academic subjects, studying Maththemetics or Physics tend to be useless. A good example of this is that a man desiring to become a renowned paintist will choose to focus on art-based subjects, providing him with radical foundation that contributes to making his dream comes true. In this case, staying at school until 18 is not a wise choice for a potential artist.
In conclusion, although studying at university is an objective for numerous people, it is unnecessary for those deciding to pursue artistic professions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 572, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gaining'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: gaining
... knowledge, it is extremely challenging to gain accessibility to higher education, and ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a wise choice for a potential artist. In conclusion, although studying at univ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26158940397 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05415249502 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619205298013 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0321094504 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.230769231 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149499955013 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595775854477 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851813655912 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914474288817 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700102757211 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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