In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?

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In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?

Modernisation has changed the society and the way of living life. Recently, people started to live in small families as it was more comfortable. This passage deals with the negative aspects of the change in family structure and arrives at a conclusion.

To start with, people started to adapt nuclear family as most of them moved to metropolitan cities for their profession. Moreover it is necessary that both parent has to work in order to manage the expenses. Children are not taken proper care as their parents concentrate on work and are mostly cared by house-maids. As a result the children lose parental care which could affect them emotionally. For instance, In early days grandparents pamper their grandchildren and shower them with love and care. Now due to nuclear family, this situation is less likely to happen.

To continue with , the decision authority and family roles have been changed . Earlier the family members get advice from the old generations who had experience and usually gives the best advice. This has changed and people started to take own decision which lead to wrong move and suffer in their later part of the life. For instance, Earlier grandparents gives advice which helped the young generation to build a strong career but now due to nuclear family they started to take own decision and ends in disgrace.

To conclude, even though nuclear family is comfortable among most of the people , this practice has degraded the traditional way of living that led to loss of love and care.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...eir profession. Moreover it is necessary that both parent has to work in order to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, as to, for instance, as a result, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98818897638 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63063222304 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566929133858 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0796313163 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152519979897 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604603373589 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066174126705 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108199499446 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808353229678 0.056905535591 142% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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