The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002.
The chart gives data to us about most common sports in New Zealand in 2002 as percentage, and also ıt is divided as girls and boys. It is evaluated for cricket,athletics,martial, arts,basketball,tennis,netball,soccer,swimming and other.
If we look carefully, the highest rate belonged to netball for girls by %25 while cricket played rate was %1 as the lowest rate. To turn boys, most of them played soccer by %24 whereas %1 of who played soccer had the bottom rate.
To continue with, tennis played rates were almost same for girls and boys by %7 and %8 respectively. Then, boys interested martial arts as much 5 times as girls played rate by %10 and also girls had %2. Boys interested to swimming by %22.5 whereas girls had %13. Other sports showed itself for boys and girls by %23 and %10.
To sum up, boys played team sports while girls interested the individual sports mostly except the martial arts and netball.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , athletics
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Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , basketball
...ated for cricket,athletics,martial, arts,basketball,tennis,netball,soccer,swimming and othe...
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Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , netball
...thletics,martial, arts,basketball,tennis,netball,soccer,swimming and other. If we look ...
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Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , swimming
...l, arts,basketball,tennis,netball,soccer,swimming and other. If we look carefully, the h...
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Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...irls had %13. Other sports showed itself for boys and girls by %23 and %10. To s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, then, whereas, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85443037975 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.28636174064 2.65546596893 161% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575949367089 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6531494495 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.2222222222 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222037047184 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103249022328 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14459834523 0.0843802449381 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160550345378 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111810118218 0.0819641961636 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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