DANGERS OF SMOKING ARE WELL KNOWN, YET MANY PEOPLE CONTINUE WITH THIS HABIT.
WHAT ARE THE CAUSES OF THIS? HOW CAN WE REDUCE SMOKING IN SOCIETY?
GIVE REASONS FOR YOUR ANSWER, AND INCLUDE ANY RELEVANT EXAMPLES FROM YOUR OWN KNOWLEDGE OR EXPERIENCE.
Smoking is an important issue to discuss in today’s world. Although it’s a widely known fact that smoking is hazardous, people fail to quit smoking. Prevalence of smoking habit increases consistently due to multiple factors including Stress and over modernization of families. Strategic actions should be taken to cope up with this emerging issue. This essay will discuss the main causes of why people cannot get rid of smoking and suggest solutions to overcome this problem.
The leading cause of smoking in today’s time is stress. The reason being Increased workload and failed relationships have made people’s lives miserable, so they find it an easy escape from all the stress. For instance a man coming home after a stressful long day and have a fight with family, he will take his stress out by lightning a cigarette. The second most common cause is trying to be modern. Cigarette in fingers is considered as a style in young generation. However it has totally destroyed our youth, they find it charming and fashionable activity. Youngsters believe they can seek attention by doing this. To illustrate take an example of a modern family if parents are active smokers, their children grow up seeing this throughout their life; adopt this habit and further pass it to their offspring. These causes collectively lead to rise of smoking habit.
In order to stop this prevailing habit of smoking, major steps should be taken. Firstly, cut down on stress of general population by avoiding overburdening of workload. Strategic approach should be made to decrease the stress of work places because if someone is in a state of peace at work, he or she will be mentally relaxed and will be more capable or responsible towards their families. Secondly, parents should be educated about adverse effects of smoking on themselves and their children in a long run. Stop this trend of proportionality between smoking and modernization. Health awareness sessions should be conducted to warn human beings about its side effects and complications because despite of being highly involved in habit of smoking, majority of population is least aware of its lethal complications. For example, Ireland started taking health awareness sessions to eradicate smoking from their nation 15 years ago and now they have successfully decreased the rate of smoking by 80%. Other than this, Government should raise prices and taxes on such products which are injurious to health and bad for human population as well as environment. Take an example of recent tax rise policy in Pakistan. Government has increased taxes on cigarettes by 13% to decrease number of smokers in country. There are some countries where smoking is totally banned in public and work places and the same law made it illegal to advertise such dangerous products.
This essay discussed that despite of knowing the fact that smoking is injurious to wellbeing and whole community, people continue with their habit of smoking. The top leading causes for this situation are believed to be a state of mental or emotional strain or tension exerted by adverse or demanding circumstances and over modernization without proper education. Possible solutions for these problems are supposed to be encouragement of mental and physical health by decreasing tension and implementation of strategic laws for prohibition of smoking and spreading social awareness against hazardous effects of smoking. To conclude, proper planning with vision, therefore, is necessary to cope up with this major issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 478, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...sidered as a style in young generation. However it has totally destroyed our youth, the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 95.0 41.998997996 226% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2986.0 1615.20841683 185% => OK
No of words: 569.0 315.596192385 180% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24780316344 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88402711743 4.20363070211 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86388335858 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 302.0 176.041082164 172% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530755711775 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 918.9 506.74238477 181% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0310585536 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.965517241 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6206896552 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86206896552 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240510110589 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700880229459 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501561214273 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171738317843 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039666821924 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 153.0 78.4519038076 195% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.