The communication between family and friends has been diminished by television. Do you agree or disagree with the statement. Use specific examples to support your answer.
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on a typical day reveals the communication between family and friends has been diminished by television and it has always been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain the communication between family and friends. Regarding this, I would like to say that I am totally agree with this statement that television diminished the communication between family and friends. Let's deeply explain it in forthcoming paragraph.
To start with the agreement of the essay, it is clearly seen that television is a big issue in one's life. This is because, masses are watching television in their free time and they do not want to communicate with their family member or friends. However, human so lazy and they want to spend their time alone. Moreover, masses have no time because they are so busy in their life. Firstly, everyone's life is to busy and after completing their work they want to relax or watching movies.
Furthermore, human do not want to waste of their time. However, most of people think that they have limited time and they do not want to waste it to communicate with friends or family member. Moreover, people feel so far from their family or friends so they do not want to any type of disturbance.
Hence, based on the arguments above, we can concluded that these days it is a big issue in human life and they have forget their relationship between family or friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
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Suggestion: conclude
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Suggestion: forgotten
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84814814815 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68783011499 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462962962963 0.580463131201 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6822945499 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206913590378 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814728177408 0.0925447433944 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784157434771 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131139365732 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896732286145 0.0609392437508 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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