You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to, because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In you letter:
Explain your situation
Describe your problems
Tell him/her when you think you can start.
Dear Sir,
I got recruited as Asset Manager in you company and dues to initiate my duties effective 1st August 2019. At first, I would like to thank you for extending opportunity to me to work with your esteemed and renowned group. I am writing this letter to explain my current obligation, which required me to postpone my joining day by 2 week and begin my duties with your company by 15th August 2019.
Firstly, being Assistant finance manager, my current role is full of responsibilities and demand knowledge of historical background of underlying transactions in order to finalize the standalone and consolidation audit effectively. I have put colossal efforts in audit assignment and managed to finalize the audit for last 6 years all together. We are on the verge of finalization of audit in any given day. Due to some unavoidable circumstances on auditor’s part, eventually, audit got shifted by three week.
Considering my separation from company and active involved by management, my line manager managed to cut-short the timelines by 1 weeks on auditor’s part. As a last resort, my company has requested me to extend my service by 2 week to have healthy and mutually beneficial separation, which seems reasonable and demand moral consideration on my part. Considering the unavoidable circumstances, I request you to kindly revise my joining date to 15th August 2019.
Hope you will consider it positively and extend your wisdom in this matter.
Yours sincerely
Gurmeet Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...ired me to postpone my joining day by 2 week and begin my duties with your company b...
^^^^
Line 5, column 510, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
... eventually, audit got shifted by three week. Considering my separation from com...
^^^^
Line 7, column 233, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
... requested me to extend my service by 2 week to have healthy and mutually beneficial...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 937.175257732 135% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20081967213 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16358137417 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602459016393 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 290.88556701 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.5870227761 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.75 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172384423638 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747835904364 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676632113499 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126447968055 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824556741785 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.