Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do.
How far do you agree with this opinion?
What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?
People mainly work in life to earn a prosperous living. Some people believe that wages of teachers and medical professionals are not in commensurate with value of their efforts, whereas the artists or businessmen make handsome earning, which is unfair. I totally agree that the important professions remain underprivileged in our society and believe that remunerating must be based on the efforts being made for the benefits of the society.
On the one hand, it is undeniable fact that educators and medical practitioners are the back-bone of the society. Teachers contribute to develop for better future generations, while doctors endeavor to save lives. Thus, for better and secure next generation their roles must be highly acknowledged and rewarded in terms of good salaries. This will also encourage young children to purse for these venerable careers, as they know there work will be regarded.
On the contrary, some entertainers like film star or business owners get lucrative income without any mental or physical hard work. The people related with film or TV industry earn lot of money for a single assignment or brand endorsement by merely working on well written script of others. Likewise, the business owners or workers make huge profits with little contribution to the economy of a country. Henceforth, their wages are unjustified accounting their contributions for a nation in longer run.
Although the role of entertainment is undeniable, yet the amounts of money these professions generate are unrealistic. It is essential to end the discrimination between different professions, which could be achieved by defining and categorizing the wages according to the effort of work and its contribution for the society. Thus, teachers and doctor must be paid better for the building strong nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, likewise, so, thus, well, whereas, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36363636364 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.012606567 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608391608392 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4264068712 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.571428571 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15177867659 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505727097295 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388368806147 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905625539526 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287809037131 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.