Some people think that art is essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion
It is argued that art is a significant subject or it is a waste of time.This essay will discuss both points of view.
On the one hand, art is a enjoyable subject.Firstly, it is true that children who learn art may develop their creativity. For instance, If you give the children a paper, they will create anything that they imagine, this will lead to better thinking. Secondly, art is something really need to children, which helps them relax.It is really beneficial and comfortable to learn art after some important classes such as math or science.Learning art partly diminishes their stress.
On the other hand, some people point out that art is a waste of time.This can be attributed to a host of reasons.I believed that children should force to learn some complicated or mandatory subjects,for example, biology or science.This is because it will help them a lot in their career in the future.In fact,it is the hardship for artist nowadays to find a stable job with the high salary compare with the others who are scientist or biologist.Nowadays,in modernizing life, technology has gained popularity, we are needing more and more scientists.Some people argue that children should be taught some subjects related technology instead of learning some worthless subjects which should be replaced.One example is by using science and technology we invented Internet which is a remarkable improvement in our life.It is undeniable that we will still make more and more important inventions in the future.
In conclusion, children should spend more time on studying other significant subjects instead of spending time to learn art.In my opinion,it is better to consider art as an optional subject.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17090909091 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12844375538 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 281.687030822 49.4020404114 570% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 237.0 106.682146367 222% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.8333333333 20.7667163134 221% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.5 7.06120827912 404% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256617586941 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142177163922 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522471075228 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179480231382 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286005958926 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.8 13.0946893788 197% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 11.3001002004 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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