For many people, the reason they hard work is to earn money. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Money has become essential to have better life style. therefore, many people believe that the best way to enhance their financial situation is by working very hard. This issue is an arguable one of the most debatable issue these days. This essay aims to discuss such an controversal issue in further detail before coming to a conclusion.
To begin with, it's irrefutable that a conspicuous variation among individuals' mentalities in defining the best way of obtaining money. Some people for example, work extremely hard with no valid result as they might select a wrong field to work in. Therefore, they undoubtedly may waste too much time and effort with no pleasurable results. While other workers might think out of the box and select different domain that made them more financial satisfied. This indeed called a smart working, as it needs deep dive research and too much risk to gain much more money than others who basically follow a traditional way in having money. On the flip side, this might be extremely dangerous as it might exacerbate their financial situation if they failed.
In contrast, there is no doubt that a passion with dedicating work and strong believe will make a different. For instance, a plethora of famous businessmen such as Stive Jobs, Apple ceo, and Bill Gate Microsoft ceo, were started from the scratch and inspired the whole world by their innovative notions. they were working extremely hard and set several clear plans, and sometimes they were failing but they did not give up, however, they ultimately succeed.
To sum up, money is extremely significant for people to have a flourish life. However, I wholeheartedly believe that hard-working with passion and good planing will make an obvious different on anyone’s financial situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in contrast, no doubt, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12671232877 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69651497318 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616438356164 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5440482042 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182981701898 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059182406516 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529023901852 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111002190631 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209114822313 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.