More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some pp think a solution can be to increase the price of fattening foods.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that there have been numerous people becoming fatter and heavier. While I agree with the idea that rising the price of foods which are high in fat is a good way to limit such a situation, I believe that there are various solutions which people could consider to keep them health.
On the one hand, it can be said that the increasing in the price of fattening foods could deter customers from excessive consumption of these food. Governments should rise taxes on all foods with a high fat or sugar content, which could help to reduce the amount of these food that people purchase. It is apparent that the prevalence of fast food or processed food could encourage people to eat them too much, leading to detrimental effects on people’s health. The likelihood of people suffering from obesity is considerably high since they have such a bad eating habit. In recent years, the rate of children at school age putting on weight has rapidly increased, becoming a big concern in different countries. Therefore, the stricter control on the price of fattening foods such as snacks, junk food or fast food can be seen as an effective way to help children abandon this eating habit and to make healthier food choices.
Despite the importance of rising the price of fattening foods, people should not ignore a range of other options which may offer various benefits to keep fit. Firstly, it is essential that people should have a balanced diet. This could be done by trying to eat more vegetables and fruit or spending time preparing meals at home. For example, in developed countries, the young generation must rediscover the art of preparing home-made food, as part of a healthy lifestyle. Secondly, it is common knowledge that people should take up regular exercise to stay healthy. For instance, while taking gentle exercise, like jogging in the park, helps people increase physical strength, alternative forms of exercise such as Yoga, Tai chi or Qigong popular among people of all ages bring mental benefits. Not only these activities could help people keep in shape, but also avoid a sedentary lifestyle.
In conclusion, although I accept that rising taxes on fattening foods is an effective solution for people to avoid obesity, I believe that other methods should be done in order to gain better achievements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
...customers from excessive consumption of these food. Governments should rise taxes on all f...
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Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
...hich could help to reduce the amount of these food that people purchase. It is apparent th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93129770992 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58451533543 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541984732824 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8302979496 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.125 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5625 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168816296109 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587013492693 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351206409244 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108316841656 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128014694663 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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