Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and
that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you
agree with this view?
In recent years, a large number of people believe that administrations should not pay for arts and it could be more vital for them to invest in other fields. In my opinion, I suppose that it is necessary for national leaders to use money for both art and different areas.
On the one hand, spending money on art comes with several benefits. To start with, art is one of means to convey traditions and cultures, which helps countries to reveal their uniqueness. For example, a vietnamese artist named To Ngoc Van renowns for a picture of a woman in “ Ao Dai”, the traditional clothes of Vietnam, sitting near a white lotus, which is compared to the beauty of vietnamese women. this picture has made a strong impressions on art industry. In addition, tourism industry would develop more when government pay much attention to art because it is a delicate touch attracting holidaymakers. many people, nowadays, have tendency to visit China due to their famous art exhibitions with various valuable works of art, which provide them with unique aesthetic experiences and generate revenue, in return.
On the other hand, it is also vital that government allocate financial resources to other fields such as education and infrastructure. First, illiteracy and traffic congestion are still major problems in many developing countries. For example, in India, many students do not go to school and the elderly are homeless, which poses a threat to the development of this nation and the integration into the world. Second, the investment of administrations in infrastructure would improve system of transportation, resulting in the increase of exchanging goods. Therefore, this leads to the enhancement of economy as well as living standard of inhabitants.
In conclusion, I believe that providing fund on art is beneficial while government also should focus particularly on other essential areas like education and public services.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24115755627 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0453369246 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604501607717 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9292101299 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.428571429 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8571428571 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182056977201 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612747470735 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444492694046 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954464262036 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363592171663 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.