The time people devote in job leaves very little time for personal life. How widespread is the problem. What problem will this shortage of time causes.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the time people devote in job leaves very little time for personal life all over the world. There are a wide range of factors that account for why this is happening. In my opinion, this problem can be remedied provided that some effective measures are taken.
There are a myriad of reasons accountable for this soaring concerns. Unlike everyday problems, which can be dealt with easily the time people devote in job leaves very little time for personal life, which is extremely perilous can lead to an array of such issues of spending long hours in office, pressure from their managers and project deadline created by clients are causing people to lose their personal life space. Thanks to the aforementioned predicaments, it is not only people but also society which can suffer immensely.
Steps to deal with this problems are many, but the most effective ones are in fact not remote or complicated but accessible and practicable. The primary one stems from the fact that by ensuring the implementation of set rules and police, government authorities can help a nation thrive. Besides, international organizations and local authorities should have take the necessary initiatives cumulatively. Only when convergent efforts from all sectors are ensured, can we aspect see some considerable progress in curbing the issue.
To conclude, dealing with the time people devote in job leaves very little time for personal life one of the most prevalent problems that faces almost all parts of the world today. Nevertheless, the concrete steps as discussed above can effectively strength the fight against and alleviate this growing concern its potential impact is indeed too dire to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...ective measures are taken. There are a myriad of reasons accountable for this soaring...
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Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...n suffer immensely. Steps to deal with this problems are many, but the most effecti...
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Line 3, column 358, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...tions and local authorities should have take the necessary initiatives cumulatively....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, nevertheless, so, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 287.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16724738676 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76893235133 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581881533101 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.7598231758 50.4703680194 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.583333333 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382956307624 0.242375264174 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12424589048 0.0925447433944 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151633629348 0.071462118173 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257376244301 0.151781067708 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133601361652 0.0609392437508 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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