Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students who keep their rooms neat and organized will be more likely to succeed than students who do not.
style="font-size:16.0pt;line-height:115%">Through history education has played prominent role in all societies. education has a direct impact on human social life. it is understandable at a glance that the school is not only a place for teaching math, chemistry or algebra but also is a place for teaching a good and ideal life style from lower ages. discipline is one of the prerequisite for better life style.
style="font-size:16.0pt;line-height:115%">discipline is as important as education. most people who have discipline in their lives are more successful than those who do not.
style="font-size:16.0pt;line-height:115%">I personally believe that most students who are organized have more chance for success than those who aren’t. but like everything, it not inevitable.
style="font-size:16.0pt;line-height:115%">-The first reason that supports my idea is that, the history shows that the most successful people are organized.
style="font-size:16.0pt;line-height:115%">style="mso-spacerun:yes"> In my opinion if someone is organized in her/his personal life, her/his will be organized in own brain. Mind organization is very important and is one of the necessary prerequisite for success. style="mso-spacerun:yes"> As a personal experience when I was in middle school, I wasn’t very organized and most of the time I failed my exams but when I go university I changed my behaviors and became more ordinary. Absolutely this change has very good impact on my scours and even my lifestyle.
style="font-size:16.0pt;line-height:115%">-The second reason I would like to bring here is that, the children with good habit (like discipline) at early ages, will be more successful in their future personal live.
style="font-size:16.0pt;line-height:115%">style="mso-spacerun:yes"> In adulthood disorganization will bother our partner in all kind of relationships.
style="font-size:16.0pt;line-height:115%">To illustrate my cousin has a disordered boyfriend, he was a very nice and handsome boy but she wasn’t satisfied with their relationship and she was uncomfortable to continue their relationship.
style="font-size:16.0pt;line-height:115%">To wrap it up I personally content that discipline has direct impact on personal life and work life success.
style="font-size:16.0pt;line-height:115%">if schools spend more attention and time to teaching students discipline, it’s not only would be very useful in their daily lives, but also it will guarantee their future lives.
style="font-size:16.0pt;line-height:115%">but as I said before nothing is inevitable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2443.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.08115942029 4.8611393121 146% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 11.2926271457 2.67179642975 423% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51884057971 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 695.7 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.51630824373 132% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6713941075 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.578947368 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1578947368 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94736842105 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.53405017921 243% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0956104621428 0.236089414692 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485331980164 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760370157127 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634221937754 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069458372915 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 11.7677419355 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.37 58.1214874552 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 23.49 10.9000537634 216% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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