Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's modern life, the entire world environment is deteriorating in a serious way. There is a notion that obligation to protect environment belongs to governments but individuals due to their little contribution. Personally, I totally disagree with the given statement and believe that environment preservation is responsibility of all people living in the world.
It is no denying that politicians and activists are considered as public figures who have a great impact on the development of each country. Moreover, their opinions and actions arr in national scale. Therefore, it leads to a widespread misconception that imperative issues, especially ecological problems, are able to improved only by effort of those aforementioned people.
Nevertheless, some people are forgetting that governments activating now are based on the votes from residents within a country. Their foremost mission is representative for their national inhabitants. In addition, the number of people working as politicians and those like them is just a small fraction compared to the one of other normal residents. For this reason, the largest contribution to a sustainable development of environment stems from the whole population. The condition of surroundings directly impacts on the living standard of us. Instead of waiting government , people should take an action on their own.
In conclusion, our lives are contingent on our awareness which leads to practical action to converse environment. Assembling all smallest but positive ones can create a profound impact on nature. This obligation belongs to everyone who are existing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...effort of those aforementioned people. Nevertheless, some people are forgetting...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61224489796 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30954480057 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2098820152 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.064525302842 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0194498700249 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417201823095 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0409245001833 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492460178591 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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