Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Between the relationship friends or family, telling a truth is important. Furthermore, as nowadays people are living in a complicatedly linked society, it is crucial to build strong bond each other. some people insist that telling the truth is the only way to build the good relationship with others. however, I, on the contrary, believe that always telling the truth is not the most important aspect in any relationship.
always telling the truth otherwise can break the relationship. Among the relationships with others, people often ask cliche questions to others like “How do I look like”, or “are you okay?”. however, even if people do not think that is pretty or okay, in certain situation, forced to do the white lie to others. For instance, for the first day in the new company, one of my team manager asked me about the atmosphere of the team. it was quite rigid, but someone was not that polite. however, since before I work in the workplace, the manager constantly insisted me that he thinks his team has perfect teamwork and great positive atmosphere in the company. As a fresh worker, it was hard to tell my honest opinion. So, I did the white lie. I was not saying the false, but I did not tell the absolute truth to him. During the meeting, the manager addressed to the all the teammate that I felt positive impression since the first day of work and the atmosphere became positive indeed after few months later. if I told truth to the manager, this situation would not be occurred.
Admittedly, in order to cover the lie, the more compact and bigger lie need to be followed. In someday, intended or not, truth will be disclosed in some reasons. Depend on the importance of degree of the lie, person who lie will be blamed by others and relationship will be broken. even if a person commits the small lie, it will be hard to build the concrete relationship each other. however, in philosophically, it is impossible to stop lie and sometimes truth turn to the lie. there will be few people who tell absolute truth when they confront the hardship. According to the research from Harvard University, over the 98 percent of the people act differently or do lie for the survival instinct. Imagine the period of childhood or the time you had confronted trouble. there are two options you given, lie than escape from that moment or tell the truth than get the punishment. As a human being, we all know telling truth is right and it is the clever option for less punishment, but the most people act differently. it is inevitable because it is human nature instinct.
For the result, intended or not, people do all lie. however, sometimes it would lead to positive result or encourage the others that they want to be heard of or believe. Rather than absolutely telling a truth, I think trying not to lie is better for us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, for instance, i think, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2363.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 500.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.726 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68065290554 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 729.0 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8739696139 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4827586207 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2413793103 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.96551724138 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182750164094 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576412331913 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676387291276 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130474166922 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678896761653 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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