In recent years, Many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping.
Is this a positive or a negative development?
In this century, people become more materialistic than ever. In other words they buy unnecessary manufactures. In this essay i will discuss both point of view and my personal conception about the topic on the following.
Firstly, the government try to convince people to make their shopping from the local shops. Moreover, doing your shopping from the small local shops won't waste much time. That is to say you can go by walking or by bike instead of driving, making some sport and in that way you kill two birds with one stone. To put in another way, the products from the small shops near your area are more healthy than the ones from supermarket.
Secondly, speaking of clothes, today our society is guilty for judging people by its clothes, even if everybody knows the idea of don't judge a book by its cover. However, we are too concernd to impress people around us and continue to care about their opinion. The is very uncomfortable because we blame society but we are society. In order that we spend to much time in large shopping center instead of doing other productive activities, like reading or hanging out with friends or cooking.
In conclusion, we should not travel so often to large shopping centers, because it is a waste of time and of energy. Therefore it is a better idea to do your groceries shopping to the small local shops to help the economy and to save more time for other works.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, speaking of, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4556742455 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3411103793 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238404431431 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835547672065 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078873643845 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137574809752 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079425958181 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.