Some people believe that to be successful at a sport you need a natural ability and others think that hard work and practice can make you successful. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Some people think that to be an amazing athlete it must be a talent while others think that being great at sports is only with working yourself up to the top. I think it is possible both ways.
Athletes are successful by their natural talent which makes them successful for sports. In Olympics or any other competition there are athletes who’s father or brother were also athletes. That means sport is already coded in their DNA. It does not mean that they do not work hard as others but they have something extra. For example 60% of Norway athletes have at least one or two relatives who were good at sports.
Hard work and practice is another way to be successful at sports but it remain really good discipline and consistency. Even for a regular people who struggle with overweight and soon as they start to work out and change their nutrition, couple of months later you can see a results. It is same way in sports as there are so many athletes who doing sports as this is their passion. For example Estonian tennis player Kaia Kanepi did not have any relatives but she worked hard and now she is one of the top tennis player in the word because of her passion.
For conclusion it is said that athletes who have natural talent are more successful in sports while other thinks it is possible to be good at sports when you work hard. I believe it is possible both ways as long as they have passion and interest what they are doing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 73, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'remains'?
Suggestion: remains
...r way to be successful at sports but it remain really good discipline and consistency....
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Line 9, column 273, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...ion, couple of months later you can see a results. It is same way in sports as there are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, really, so, while, at least, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50757575758 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2672155388 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.180507327 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5384615385 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309523203677 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112785726581 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854645224605 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210039320841 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556204931168 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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