a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Education is playing vital role for an individual.The overall development is based on eduacation only.Education helping the society to sustain in this world.To support education schools ,colleges are established.And the people are taking admissions into these schools for their overall development.School provides a wide array of subjects into their curriculum.
In the statement author assert that a nation should require to put the same curriculum
until students enter colllege.I am totally agree with this statement.If the curriculum is same then all the people from rural area can also have an opportunity to learn the same things as the students in metro cities are learning.So irrespective of a place ,rural students also getting equal quality of education.So there is really no difference
in the rual and metropolitian student as both learns the same syllabus.
Moreover,Consider example , if one included the syllabus of American history In metro city,if it is also included in the syllabus of rural area,then students from the rural areas also not enough ideas about the american history.And also the syllabus of a nation should revise over the period of time in order to get newer version only.
Furthermore,If the curriculumn is same irrespective of geographical location,castes ,people have same opportunity to learn the same things so when those students enters into colleges there will be no differences amongst the students because everyone has the same level of education basebase.So if this so rural areas students can also compete with the metro cities students.
In the conclusion,ation should need for all its students to study the same national curriculum untill they enter college,that will actually helping in the overall development of the nation only.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 275.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57454545455 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21871912475 2.79657885939 115% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 23.0359550562 239% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.8050098943 60.3974514979 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 306.6 118.986275619 258% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.0 23.4991977007 234% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.8 5.21951772744 226% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 7.80617977528 372% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358363337292 0.243740707755 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.231248178242 0.0831039109588 278% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.216968170872 0.0758088955206 286% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210300239371 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.191544667447 0.0667264976115 287% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.3 14.1392134831 228% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.27 48.8420337079 -3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 12.1743820225 223% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.91 12.1639044944 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.79 8.38706741573 129% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 11.8971910112 269% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 11.2143820225 214% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 32.0 11.7820224719 272% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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