The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first map illustrates the present Islip town center and second portray the development plan.
Altogether, there will be more spots in the new town center. besides, some location will undergo demolition and also replacement.
Presently, the town center has huge housing in the middle and south. Furthermore, there's the main road which runs from west to east and has shops along with it on either side. Moreover, there is a school and an enormous park which are connected to the main road by two divergences in the west and east respectively. Further, there is the countryside beyond the main road.
According to the plan, a huge dual carriageway will be constructed with the removal of the countryside and chunk of park. In addition, a pedestrians-only pathway replaces the main road and have old shops alongside. However, old shops which were situated in the north of the previous main road are replaced by a bus station, a big shopping center, a car park, and new housing. similarly, the former housing got split into two sections and a new housing right beside the park. though, the school and park are kept at the same spot.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...g in the middle and south. Furthermore, theres the main road which runs from west to e...
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...s the countryside beyond the main road. According to the plan, a huge dual carri...
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...ng center, a car park, and new housing. similarly, the former housing got split into two ...
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Suggestion: Though
...nd a new housing right beside the park. though, the school and park are kept at the sa...
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...ool and park are kept at the same spot.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, however, moreover, second, similarly, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91237113402 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71942759196 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577319587629 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7832740213 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4166666667 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0849212463077 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351864365287 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373691224017 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0663983265775 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481691893095 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.