“TRAVELLING BROADENS YOUR MIND” . ARE YOU FOR OR AGAINST WITH THIS IDEA?
Many people believe that taking a vacation and going on tours would help to widen travelers’ knowledge and perception. I totally agree with this view.
Nowadays, when people are too tired of working, they tend to travel to relax. Besides, it is true that travelling enables tourists to broaden their minds in certain respects.
Firstly, while traveling abroad, travelers can learn new languages, which may increase their confidence. If tourists have learnt to speak a few basic phrases for communication in a foreign country, it would be easier for them to interact with native speakers. Therefore, they would feel more comfortable to learn about the cultures as well as to widen their general knowledge of the destination. What every journey or trip brings to the adventurers is the possibility to spot the different and original architecture, try local cuisine, and the beauty of nature. it could also make tourists more aware of other traditions and help them understand different views and perceptions that foreigners have.
Secondly, travel also gives the travelers great chances to strengthen their independence, because it is the time when they escape from their familiar daily life surroundings . Consequently, they would be likely to dip themselves in certain unpleasant and stressful situations, cultural shocks, and criminal risks which challenge them to be more independent, stronger, and smarter to resolve the problems on their own. Those experiences would help to make people feel cheerful and exciting, and allow them to forget about their troubles as well as their boring daily routine even for a while.
In conclusion, I consider that traveling may bring lots of fresh, exciting, and unforgettable discoveries and experiences to tourists. this amusement is inclined to help enhance their sentiments, widen their overall understanding of mankind’s life, and cherish the allure of nature and environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, as to, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99742902237 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603333333333 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.996876202 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.428571429 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163235123202 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609357000256 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516679589882 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108896041526 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504697083673 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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