Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Since the beginning of the time, human being has always strived to improve their living standards and bring more convenience to their day-to-day lives.
Throughout history, education has played a pivotal role in all societies. Today’s human brain function is more complicated than past. our life plan changed and this change has a direct impact on our behavior especially children behaviors. Young people are like a with board every little change affects them. l agree with the sentences above but in some cases, I saw completely different behavior. In modern life, they are rare but undeniable. I will explicate my point of view in 2 outstanding reasons.
First and foremost point I would like to bring here is with internet emergence all human being sources changed. Today, Google and the other explorer are the only sources to answer our questions. In my opinion parental dependency is gone and internet dependency takes the place. dependence on something is in our DNA. we can’t live without spiritual and material dependence and this is way we have a lot of internet addicted. I want to bring here a simple example as illustrate, in the past if one wants make some traditional food he/she asked his/her mother and she gave them all her experience but now everyone will take the recipes from google.
The second important point is most modern-day parents’ work out of the home. In the past, most of the mothers were a housewife and the kid had a very deep emotional bond with their mother because technically in early childhood their mother was their only friend and teacher. When the women started to work outside the home the deep emotional bond improved and become a reasonable emotional connection. they love each other as much as past but their dependency is more reasonable and in this situation, undeniable separation is easier.
To wrap it up and make a long story short, I believe it is very important that we play our best role in society and family. we must eliminate emotional excesses and stay stable in our line. The parents must prepare their children for society and decrease the dependency is one of the most important preparations. In modern-day we need independence and strange people those who have healthy family dependency.
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- TPO 54 Writing Independent Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state sponsored Olympic teams Use specific reasons and examples to support you 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Students who keep their rooms neat and organized will be more likely to succeed than students who do not. 63
- Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways, or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation (buses, trains, subways)? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay. 70
- Some students prefer to study alone Others prefer to study with a group of student Which do you prefer Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 85
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
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Suggestion: a lot of (internet)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0290237467 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72221104148 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577836411609 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5063139731 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6363636364 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2272727273 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 5.45110844103 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220805642195 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534856169627 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498686465549 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108594842153 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149236103217 0.0645574589148 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.