A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Considering the requirements of the nation's education system there are multiple number of factors which differs from student to student. Such as which languages students prefer to study or whether the student is willing to study technology based subjects or literature. Till fourth grade it can be wise enough to make them study under specific circumstances because till fourth grade a student gets a basic idea about his/her likings towards the subject and from grade fifth they can choose their choice of subject.
If we consider a class of 30 students, in that group of students some might be willing to pursue their career in engineering field, some might be interested to study medicine, some are interested in art field or sports. So considering such kind of scenario if the nation's education system makes it mandatory to study the same subjects as your fellow classmates, the student might lose his interest to study that subject which is not going to help them to pursue their choice of career. And ultimately if the students continues to avoid those subjects there grades may decrease in number which may impact their over all report.
Moreover if he look over this if the students are provided their choice in the selection of the subjects they wish to study that will be very helpful for them to have a correct goal towards what they exactly want to achieve and this will be very helpful to build their foundation strong in that stream. If a particular student wants to pursue engineering but when it is compulsory to take a specific set of subjects in that case studying literature or biology is not going to help him/her out. Instead of wasting there energy on subjects which are not fruitful to them, providing a range of subjects will boost their confidence and they will get a clear idea towards their ultimate goal.
Also if the nation makes all of it's student to study the same subjects or any same circumstances it will not be the worst case to study but studying in such a condition where the study already know that this specific subject is not going to help them either way they will not concentrate on that subject and which wont be the ideal case.
The level of thinking differ from individual to individual so we can't expect the same kind of output from each student when they haven't given their best shot. It is human tendency to work hard enough in their liking based career and considering all such aspects nations education system should give their priority to the liking of students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
Considering the requirements of the nations education system there are multiple num...
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...onsidering such kind of scenario if the nations education system makes it mandatory to ...
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Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: FELLOW_CLASSMATE[1]
Message: Use simply 'classmates'.
Suggestion: classmates
...tory to study the same subjects as your fellow classmates, the student might lose his interest to...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... may impact their over all report. Moreover if he look over this if the students ar...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'looks'.
Suggestion: looks
...ir over all report. Moreover if he look over this if the students are provided ...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...idea towards their ultimate goal. Also if the nation makes all of its student ...
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Line 17, column 66, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...fer from individual to individual so we cant expect the same kind of output from eac...
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Line 17, column 130, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...d of output from each student when they havent given their best shot. It is human tend...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, moreover, so, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2098.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 436.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8119266055 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44772378713 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447247706422 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 635.4 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.2765293262 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.833333333 118.986275619 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.3333333333 23.4991977007 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233570394101 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104386983806 0.0831039109588 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655120413019 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156306974056 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561311109794 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 14.1392134831 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 48.8420337079 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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