As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
The effect of technology on the day to day lives of people is a debatable topic as it depends on the perspective in which they are observed. Any character that is undertaken by a person as an effect of reliance on technology has two sides which in most cases contradict each other as positive and negative. Let's consider the rise of social media use in recent years. It can be argued that it has a negative effect on the younger generation as they rely on the same for things such as validation of their self-image, popularity, and love (which is unfortunately judged by the number of likes they receive for the post they put up on sites like Instagram, Facebook, etc.). However, it can also be argued that social media has helped in reaching out to an audience that encloses the world to create awareness for various important topics ranging from nature preservation to spirituality.
Similar explanations exist for various other effects of technology o various topics that have been discussed below. We may say that human capability to remember meagre things such as telephone numbers, addresses, etc. has been severely affected with the rise of mobile phones and tablets which in turn paves way for a human mind to focus on bigger and better things in other aspects of their life (personal and professional). Human reliance on technology has deteriorated their excitement to learn new things as anything and everything is available on the internet but this also gives a humungous exposure to various different kinds of knowledge sources apart from books that can be used by one to improve themselves regularly. New applications (from electronics such as self-driving cars to simple things such as Netflix) arise every day that ease lives of people that might prove to make them lazy but it also gives way to new problems that provide opportunity to open creative parts of human mind that tries to solve them thus paving way for human creativity.
In conclusion, the effect of technology on humans and their ability to think depends on how they chose to perceive and use these technological advancements. Use it the right way, and you improve your standard of life otherwise you may end up suffering from what doctors call these days, digital dementia.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, thus, apart from, in conclusion, such as, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 382.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91361256545 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74848790074 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539267015707 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.7789476055 60.3974514979 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.416666667 118.986275619 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8333333333 23.4991977007 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.21951772744 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154672577983 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553330503342 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440666430505 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101285507071 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206822447082 0.0667264976115 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 48.8420337079 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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