TPO-25 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Youngsters are the future citizens of the society. It is always necessary that young ones be trained to serve the community along with their career advancements. I believe that youth spends enough time for community activities for a couple of reasons that are elaborated in the subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, the well reputed universities at present look into the student applicants profile in detail for any community activities. Likewise, they check the extracurricular activities the student has done and only if they qualify, the seat will be granted. For instance, community service either in a hospital or any religious activities depicts a child’s mind to serve the society. it also shows the ability of a student to serve back to their community. Therefore, it is important for the youngsters to actively participate in social work.
Secondly, at times the child will have an internal sense of commitment which will make them engage in certain voluntary services. For instance, a child with a patriotic mind will enroll in voluntary military services. These kinds of activities has another advantage which will help them procure good job and even better chances to get selected in work because of their prior knowledge. Hence, young mind’s can make change in the society due to their sense of responsibility.
Thirdly, many youngsters do spend time doing voluntary activities to build their character or to have the real world experience. Moreover, they can even develop their leadership qualities which are essential in their future life. At times the parents take initiative to make their kids do the social activities so that they have their loyalty to society.
To conclude, the young generation do spend time for the activities in the society for the admission purpose into a college, their character building as well as their love for society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...child's mind to serve the society. it also shows the ability of a student to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, likewise, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87139919435 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526666666667 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.777123787 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.125 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134294121874 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477904735614 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461186064107 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885252799065 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050322414676 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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