People should follow custom and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Globalization creates many chances for people to work or live in another nation, It also challenges these citizens adjust themselves to changes in new environment. In my opinion, they should adapt to customs and traditions of host country.
On the one hand, I believe that to commence a new life in another country, it is not easy for stranger to comply with foreign lifestyle immediately. Sometimes, newcomer may face a dilemma because host country’s way of living is long-standing, various and completely different with standard, which imprinted profoundly in their mind. For instance, European often greet partners with handshake meanwhile Japanese always bow when they meet customers. Indian also shake hand when they communicate with partners but for them, one tight handshake is purported as an impolite action. Therefore, immigrants should learn and follow native customs and traditions to close cultural gap between newcomers and local people. Furthermore, it helps the integration progress becomes easier. Obviously if people respect the local culture, try to adjust behaviors in order to assimilate, they will receive respect again from surrounding community. As a result, they are able to build up a better relation with colleagues, partners in working or studying. Additionally, they also can get on well with their neighbors.
On the other hand, compliance with the host nation’s conventions may avoid unwanted problems such as being treated unfairly or unnecessary misunderstandings. It also can eradicate cultural conflicts and reduce social clash. Besides, expatriate, who are not ready for cultural assimilation, may have the risk of isolation from society.
In the final analysis, I argue for the point of view that immigrants should have suitable adaption to the country’s traditional practices. It may help them to live in harmony in the exotic community
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 565, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., one tight handshake is purported as an impolite action. Therefore, immigrants s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54827586207 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11087425726 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641379310345 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8962100934 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5625 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150597969056 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469855564284 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544386136049 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101280386688 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780412531732 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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