Tourist
One of the ways for familiar people with other cultures and moral characteristic in another nation is journey to that place. There is a viewpoint that, international tourism may lead to the conflict between native and foreign people rather than right understanding from each other. Personally, I partially disagree with above statement, and believe that tourism industry has both of the above effects at the same.
journey to the foreign country as a tourist and communication with people of that nation is an ideal way for right understanding of their behaviours and cultures. Although, there are other ways for realizing that, such as, search in google or watching through TV, but none of them, in my opinion, cannot given precise information about the people manner and culture related with that country because, they may because of the political problems between governments of two countries, be fake news or exaggerated news. For instance, people in some countries known Iranian people as a terrorist because of the fake news published in their mediums. But, travel to Iran and relation with their people can change this view, and help to recognition their reality behaviours. Thus, trip to other nations and have relation with their people, can assist to better understanding and even more buddy between people from different cultures.
However, tourism can create a tension between people by different ways. To begin with, increased social anomalies because of different cultures. The type of cloth, hair styling, and even smoking by the tourists can be have negative influence on teenagers, and persuade them to imitate from them. Consequently, this trend lead to the conflict between parents that are concern about their children and tourists. In addition, increased in crimes such as rape by the foreigners can lead to violence between native and tourists. These events create a sense of dissatisfied among locals toward the tourists.
To sum up, we should accept some problem of tourists presence in our country, but in contrast, we should also consider this point that, tourism industry is the best way that we can present correctly our behaviours to other countries
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Journey
... of the above effects at the same. journey to the foreign country as a tourist and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25925925926 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69854866873 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.3144364115 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.066666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0829258299183 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.029868086578 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609585383322 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582667558422 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405203474834 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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