Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services? Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that opinions have diverged on the issue of citizens paying for healthcare and education by themselves. While there are some valid arguments for the government’s financial support for these services, I still believe that schooling and medical care should be free of charge to citizens.
Opponents usually argue that people have the responsibility to purchase for their education and healthcare. Firstly, it is recognized that citizens tend to live a more balanced life in order to stay healthy when they no longer have free access to medical services. They would certainly pay attention to their diets as well as participate in more activities for the sake of their bodies, leading to the fact that it can help them to save on an extensive amount of medical expenses. Besides, many people believe that students paying for their tuition fees are likely to appreciate their educational opportunities and concentrate more on their study. Consequently, students would attend class regularly and submit the assignments on time, which boosts their study productivity.
Despite the preceding arguments, I support the idea that healthcare and education should be funded by the government so that citizens can enjoy free services. By allocating financial resources for medical services, the government can relieve the stress on the health of inhabitants, especially those living in the mountainous and rural areas. Moreover, citizens could also reduce the financial burden and make delicate efforts to their work. In addition, with the government subsidies on education, more students are offered opportunities to enhance advanced knowledge, hence increasing the probability of getting a better job. As a result, this could lower the unemployment rate and make the country more affluent since students can contribute to their society.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the government should invest in education and healthcare so that citizens have free access to these services, which possibly benefits the country in the long term.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, still, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48113207547 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95335257702 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537735849057 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2509334709 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.076923077 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1538461538 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224096634903 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853340168586 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876367606334 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162307865197 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843605535558 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.