A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Implementing a unique curriculum for all students of a nation up until college is a potentially contentious topic. While I believe a good education relies on diversity of subjects and teaching styles, these could easily be achieved by implementing a basic curriculum to be followed by all students, and extra classes that every student can choose from. In my opinion, students should be allowed to choose what they study to a certain extent, since every person is different and they know to what extent a certain subject will influence their future career.
Firstly, a student can more easily assimilate information on a subject they are interested in, and it would therefore prove more efficient for students to choose some of their courses. For example, a person who is not particularly skilled at Mathematics, but really enjoys Literature, should be allowed to select a lower-level Mathematics course and a more advanced English Literature one. Not only will this student enjoy learning for her classes, but she will also get realistic grades for her future field of study. Since every single person in a class has different values, passions, and beliefs, offering them a unique curriculum seems futile.
Secondly, we consider teenagers as young adults, and we trust them with making decisions that will have strong consequences on their future. Then, why would we not trust them with choosing a part of their courses? Furthermore, multiple curricula would allow students to take a multitude of courses in diverse fields and get a more comprehensive idea about the field in which they want to construct a career.
It could be argued that offering the chance at different curricula would prove unfair to certain students, due to the fact that two programs might not be as qualitative or as thorough. However, if there would exist a basic mandatory curriculum implemented nationally, it would insure that all students have the same basic level in core disciplines such as Mathematics, Sciences, and Humanities. In the additional courses they take, the level should be settled beforehand, such that every student who took a certain course is just as knowledgeable as the others.
To conclude, a nation should certainly require all of its students to have knowledge in the same fields up to a point. A nation would benefit from well-rounded individuals that know the basic notions of every field. However, every student has their unique way of comprehending the world, their specific goals, needs, and passions, and should therefore be allowed to choose the path they want to follow.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 278, Rule ID: INSURE_THAT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ensure' (=make sure)? 'Insure' means 'pay money to insurance company'.
Suggestion: ensure
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, of course, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2181.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 422.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1682464455 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83084123399 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504739336493 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.77640449438 507% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5332553608 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.3125 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.375 23.4991977007 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9375 5.21951772744 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247224856938 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890528820301 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0975308844232 0.0758088955206 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146588833026 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949961512234 0.0667264976115 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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